A Weakness of Wind
A Weakness of Wind(for Glenda Gale Owens)Gust to dustdusk is but susurrusas an ill wind ruffles stiller wingsand a twilight sigh limnsthe detritus of dreams.Cyan in the streamof a conscious...
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Quote:Foregonein four-quartered scornthe son that used to risein the warmth of her eyesis now surmisedin a mourning psalm...As the breeze softly cries to calm.Luke, the second poem this evneing about...
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A little long for me, but still awesome poetry at its best. MrLeslie. http://p200.ezboard.com/baspiringpoets"
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Latin is the language that lawyers and doctors use to blind us with, but you have opened my eyes."I love being a writer, but I hate the paper work."
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Luke,I held my breath most of the way through this lovely, sad piece. I believe this addresses the passing of your mother. How beautifully you write:Quote:Songless,an eagle shrieks in volant ironyso...
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Luke, A very touching write. Congratulations on receiving the P.O.W. nomination.Wanda
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Luke,Let me just say that there are poems that have bottoms and tops, and then there is this one - some poems are unbounded and should remain so.There is a lot in this poem: wordplay, returning...
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Once again, the muse has stirred your poet's heart and you have captured an essence that makes poetry live. Blessings...nessi"We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospection."Anais...
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Quote:Foregonein four-quartered scornthe son that used to risein the warmth of her eyesis now surmisedin a mourning psalm...As the breeze softly cries to calm.Luke, I enjoyed this. A real word feast.
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